I alla fall, behöver lite tips på hur jag kan få till "rimmen" i verserna. Känns som det mest är massa random ord, medan jag vill få allt att rimma på något vis...
Jag tar bara ut en del av texten här. Och jag kommer antagligen ändra om en del. Men oavsett, har ni kära musiker några ord?
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What do I do to make this right
What have I done to go this far
Played a role I never found myself in
So you asked who I really was
I'm that guy who said too much
A menace for our time
Besides you came to me, never gave up
Something I noticed when it was too late
[Refräng]
This ordinary life
The one I've never had
Like I was used to things
That I've never done
You spotted me through this pace
Of anger and disgrace
You threw the words at me
Stepped away and said I've had
Enough of you and your lil' games
What have I done to go this far
Played a role I never found myself in
So you asked who I really was
I'm that guy who said too much
A menace for our time
Besides you came to me, never gave up
Something I noticed when it was too late
[Refräng]
This ordinary life
The one I've never had
Like I was used to things
That I've never done
You spotted me through this pace
Of anger and disgrace
You threw the words at me
Stepped away and said I've had
Enough of you and your lil' games
Jag har en halvt färdig melodi till nuvarande text. Men ifall jag byter ut orden så behöver jag nog ändra om lite i melodin också förstås.
Tack på förhand!!
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